Carlo Gems Year 3: This week we have been studying poems. We decided to write poems about colours.

Friday, October 12, 2012

This week we have been studying poems. We decided to write poems about colours.

Red

Red looks like red red roses.

Red sounds like a very loud fire engine.

Red feels very!!! Very!!! Angry.

Red smells like a very hot chilli!!!

Red feels exciting.

by Hayden

4 comments:

Anonymous said...: Red is Exiting like other poems of colours that all the class to see soon.

Federico; October 16, 2012 at 5:43 PM
Anonymous said...: Im just impatient to see the other poems of the Rainbow poems.

Federico; October 18, 2012 at 6:35 PM
Anonymous said...: Well done Hayden it is very good.
Brian; November 6, 2012 at 9:48 PM
Emmanuel said...: Dear Heyden,

The poem is very good, it has a lot of describing words .

What's your favourite poem you wrote so far?.

From Emmanuel; November 15, 2012 at 10:06 AM

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Friday, October 12, 2012

This week we have been studying poems. We decided to write poems about colours.

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